While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" (Raises his fist at her). I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. We feel so ashamed! We were given the room." Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. Where did you get the gall to talk to us like that!? Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. But worse than that, I was being a horrible sister!" What do you think, Pep? Youve made your point! NOTHING!! How can I help you?" Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? See if I care! 5 months of research ruined. Just a head's up. "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" Literature. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. I hate gator wrestling! Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! Lincoln: (tearful) No! She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. She knew it didn't mean the weather, it was going to be bright and sunny all day. What seems to be the problem?" (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. I do not own the Loud . The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." ), Lincoln: (to the viewers) " I can't believe they actually locked me out the house, which is also my home. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. (The family screams in horror. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Luan added. Kick the . Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. White hair extended ending9. ", Baseball Announcer: "The windup, the pitch. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Also please don't flame me. My first story is done. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." Slow down Lynn! Didn't you say you would never kick us out? UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. I was being a sore loser! I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. Lola yelled. Lincoln: You can't do anything right! She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. Status Update. Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? My own family, locking me out. The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. NOBODY!!! Lincoln asked, as he started crying yet had an angry look on his face, "What's really lousy is that you guys had the nerve to make us feel guilty for the stuff we did when the reason we got kicked out of the hotel was because you two decided to act like irresponsible teenagers and go for a late night swim in the pool without any swimwear on!" There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. They all shouted. The worst part is, they had no argument against this. Journal. ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. SQUIRRELS WIN! Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. Lola: Me too! "Aren't you guys going to help us?" What kind of parents would do that? It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. Rita: Honey! Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! WE RUINED OUR WHOLE FAMILY!!! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. Here's another Alternate Ending. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. I cant take a moment more of this! That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. Learn more. Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino He's just really mad, isn't he? Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. "Well mom, you know what I think?" ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? They got their answer when, suddenly, the door the spa was kicked open by someone's shoe. Luna. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. Uh-uh, I'm nothaving it. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. Now we've broken the shower." "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. Lynn: NO! "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Cuts back to now. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. ), Lincoln: But you know what!? Rita: Honey, please. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. I'll definitely come to your next game, Lynn. the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. Theres no need to shout. And he did not look happy. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). How can I help you?" Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? This is a family moment. This proves it. It's no fun without Lincoln! "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" But this particular day, one of those children has been left out due to some "bad luck". Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. I don't want you quit something you love because of me. I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. Why did you kick me out of the house? When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. Lana: *Gasp* All my pets are now homeless! Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. . She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending Add to Favourites By HaileyKittydoesart Published: Mar 31, 2021 Favourites Comment 4K Views "I'm not bad luck!" Lincoln said in a megaphone, he was done with sleeping outside and eating acorns to survive. My team needs that! No Such Luck/Frog Wild Episode aired Mar 14, 2017 TV-Y7 22 m IMDb RATING 5.1 /10 218 YOUR RATING Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln is rejected by his sisters because he is "bad luck"; Lincoln and Lana protect the frogs from being dissected. (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. Then, he opened it up. Lucy: Gasp! "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." Why? They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. I have just had it! I tried to make it as comical as i could. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! (Lynn looks confused.) Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! House of Lies alt ending14. Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. No pun intended. HATE ME FOREVER!!! But right now, ive had it! Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. I hate boring science lectures! The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. Give it back! showing a flashback of the episode No Such Luck. I hate softball! A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. [knocks Pep down], [Lynn finishes her run and gets picked up by her family in celebration of her victory. You can't ground us, we're the parents!" "Which room number is it?" Youre our brother! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. "Listen to what?" But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. *, Lincoln: It's not fair. LYNN LOUD HITS A GRAND SLAM!!! Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. ", Lincoln: "Thanks. Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. You took it too far! As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. Completed I wonder if the windows are locked?" Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. SQUIRRELS WIN! Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Theres nothing lucky about it! It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." All of you!" Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . Lucy: Lincoln's right! We need it! ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. Angus: Oh do tell. Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. Rita stood up and heads to the door. Ruth shouted back, insulted. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. No more Loud Family? "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." I messed up and maybe i did want to support some of you guys! I hate that you don't love me anymore! she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. I hate clowning! "Sigh. 902 8 2. Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." As much as she didn't want to, she knew that slamming the door in his face would make the situation even worse than it already was, so she opened the door enough for him to get in. ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. Anything bad happen then? Lincoln: Alright then, call them. "So," Lori started with, in an icy tone, "Let's recall what we promised you when you agreed to take us on vacation." ", (the sisters cheers. Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. So we've been in here trying to pass the time. We just thought you were bad luck, we didnt mean to upset you like this. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. We don't need to get violent here. He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). He just looks away as he enters the police car, and is driven away to jail. [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". (The rest of the family is enjoying their time with beach activities), Lincoln: (takes off his sunglasses, deeply annoyed) But unfortunately only when im in the squirrel suit(puts the head back on), (Several moments pass. Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." Lincoln: I don't believe it! "Wait, what are you saying?" "What's wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. You all are really, really bad luck! Trivia. (facepalms. Luan brought it. I need to hide! I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! Anyway, here's my fanfiction. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! (tears up.). (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. I need to get out of here! "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? Let's go! He flies over to her and onto her hand.) I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! "Aha!," she said, in triumph over what she found, "It appears that you were kicked out and supposed to leave the hotel at 9 am sharp." Experimental One Shot. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. I heard you scream! Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. You can never come back. And it wasn't just her, everyone in the lobby felt it and they looked around, wondering if there was an unexplainable earthquake coming. Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. No self-insert oc this time. With how much of a hatedom Lynn Jr got after this episode, I had to have her own up to her mistakes. Two more squirrels collide into each other and miss the catch. I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. In order for him to not have "bad luck", his sisters forced him to wear a squirrel suit from Lynn's baseball game. He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" I hate concerts! Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. No such luck alt ending5. A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Even you Lisa! Rita: Lincoln?! Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). I'll just play softball all by myself! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. And can you please unlock my room for me? [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby.

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